There is a lot of symbolism throughout the
short story “The Yellow Wallpaper.” To understand most of the symbolism in this
short story you need to remember that this story was written in the 1890’s and
many women wanted to establish and gain rights for themselves in society.
First, the husband in “The Yellow Wallpaper”, John, symbolizes the average man
and husband in the 1890’s. Like many of the men during this time period, John
will not listen to his wife when she tries to communicate with him. She tries
to tell him how she feels about the wallpaper and how much she dislikes but he
just passes it off to her as her “nervous depression” and speaks nothing else
of the situation. John always thinks he knows what is best for his wife, as
most men though at this time. During this time in history women often weren't given
a voice for making changes or decisions and therefore the men would make these
decisions and in this case at the cost of his wife’s happiness and mental
well-being. Another avenue of symbolism in this short story is how the wife
represents a woman of this era who wants to be heard and not remain inferior. Throughout
the story the author mentions how the wallpaper makes her feel trapped, this is
why I believe the wallpaper symbolizes society or “The Man” keeping her enclosed.
Society wanted to keep women in the position they were already in, the men always
having the say and the upper-hand. That is why in this short story anytime the
wife questioned the wallpaper, the husband would give her a medical response or
relate it back to this “illness” she had. When you read this short story you
notice that the wallpaper changes throughout the story. In the beginning she
sees the paper as displeasing to the eye, it is ripped and spoiled in places
and has this sickening yellow color, but as you read on she talks about this
pattern that she can’t follow and she starts to see this women inside the
pattern. This woman represents the other women who have been pushed into
insanity by this wallpaper, or society. By the end of the short story the wife
starts to refer herself as a woman in the paper after she rips it off the walls
out of pure hate for the paper and everything it represented. This only helps
my case when I say that the “women in the paper” are those other women who suffered
from the same depression that the wife did. This wallpaper encloses her in the
traditions that society had in the 1890’s when women want to be heard but men,
or John, would not listen to them. In conclusion, the yellow wallpaper mainly
symbolizes this era where women were going through a depression because they
wanted a voice that society wouldn’t give them. They wanted women’s rights and
freedom and independence rather than always having a man there to help them and
look after them. As I explained earlier, the largest symbol in this story is
that the wallpaper is society keeping the women enclosed and pushing them into
insanity.
The first thing I liked seeing in your work was the amount of detail and extra information used. I understood the point you were trying to make, but the details were a bit scattered and I couldn't tell when there was a clear transition to your next point. Usually, paragraphs helps a lot. The last third of your essay, you began to use words like "my" and "I" a lot. When writing an essay with a prompt, it is already assumed this is your opinion and you don't need to specifically state it is your opinion. Overall, it was easy to read and I liked the broad vocabulary used in it.
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